Sunday 18 November 2012


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“Summary of the whole play script: THE VALLEY OF FEAR”
ACT NO.01:
  • Scene # 01:
Setting: railway compartment, Vermissa valley 1875.
McMurdo has arrived to Vermissa valley. He is travelling in a train compartment. He seats down, takes out a paper have a look at it, takes out a revolver check if it is loaded and puts it back. Scanlan and Cormac see this. They ask him if he is armed and his whereabouts. McMurdo explains that he is from Chicago and one of the ancient orders of freemen. Scanlan says the sign, “dark nights are unpleasant”, and McMurdo shakes his hand and completes the countersign “for strangers to travel”. They introduce themselves to each other. Scanlan and Cormac ask him to visit McGinty who is the body master and everything happens in Vermissa valley based upon his order. Scanlan and Cormac get off at their destined stop. Police officers approach McMurdo; he doesn’t talk to them positively. Police officers warn him to be careful while choosing friends in Vermissa valley.

  • Scene # 02:
Setting: Shafter’s lodging 1875.
Baldwin who is a scorer trying to convince Ettie to go out. Ettie is giving excuses but promises to meet on Friday as she is threatened because Baldwin is a scowrer. Shafter arrives and witnesses Baldwin. Shafter does like Baldwin presence around his daughter and in his lodge. McMurdo arrives and he is supposed to stay at Shafter’s. He finds Ettie adorable.

  • Scene # 3
 Setting: Baker Street 1895.
Holmes is an investigator. He is reading a ciphered message stating 534...C2…13. He is suspecting Professor Moriarty and stating that he is controlling power of underworld. He is the schemer of all the time and a mind behind devilry. Watson calls him as Napoleon of Crime. He is such a clever mind that he never leaves any proof against him. He is the controlling man of a chain of people including fighting men, pickpockets, blackmailers and criminals. They tend to decode the ciphered message. Fred Porlock is Professor Moriarty and Watson is dreading as he suspects him and asks Holmes to burn the message.They tend to guess the book. Their first guess is “Bible” but the idea gets rejected as bible’s each edition has different pages. Second guess is Bradshaw which is a railway timetable. This idea also gets rejected as the vocabulary is limited so a general message cannot be sent via it. Finally Almanac is chosen. They are able to decipher the message “there is danger may come to Douglas at birlstone house birlstone pressing”. At the same time, MacDonald approaches and tells them that Mr. Douglas has been murdered.

  • Scene # 4 

Setting: union house salon 1875 the bar.
McGinty and his fellow scowrers are reading news written by James Stranger. This news unfolds the truth about the existence of criminal organization. McGinty wants to teach a hard lesson to James for unveiling the truth of scowrers existence. Meanwhile Scanlan approaches and informs McGinty about his meeting with McMurdo.

  • Scene # 5

Setting: Birlstone Manor 1895 the study.
A body is lying on the floor with its head behind the chair. A sawn off gun lying as well. On the table, hand lamp is placed with a partially burnt candle. A single dumb bell is lying beneath the table. Hammer is lying; window and curtain are partially opened. Doctor Wood and Sergeant Wilson are inspecting the body and collecting the findings. They are waiting for McMurdo and Holmes to arrive. Barker is Mr. Douglas close friend and he informs the police first. When Mason comes in he sees that gun is wired. They also get to see tattoo on his arm with a triangle inside a circle. Barker arrives and offices interrogate him. Barker explains that the murder has been committed around half past eleven last night. According to him, He was in the bedroom when he heard the gun shot. He reaches within 30 seconds and finds Mr. Douglas lying. Mrs. Douglas also comes down but he prevents her from seeing the sight.

  • Scene # 6
Setting: A railway Compartment 1895.
Holmes, Watson and McDonald are sitting down and are discussing the clues. Holmes and McDonald are talking about the moat, while Watson is trying to find out how the murderer escaped. Holmes tells about Porlock's message, and they start suspecting professor Moriarty. McDonald also suspects Barker as Mason tells them that Mr. Douglas disliked Mrs. Douglas' and Barker's friendship. Holmes has a feeling that there is a chain between Mrs. Douglas and Professor Moriarty and he wants to follow that chain.

  • Scene # 7
Setting: Shafter's Lodging. 1875. The kitchen.
McMurdo is being asked to leave Shafter's Lodging. By Mr. Shafter because he gets to know that McMurdo is one of the ancient orders of freemen. He tells him that he is innocent but he doesn’t believe him. Ettie comes and tells that he is too late, Baldwin comes and they both get introduced to each other. McMurdo and Baldwin start to fight on to get Ettie. They both challenge each-other.

  • Scene # 8 
Setting: Birlstone Manor 1895. The study.
Sergeant Wilson, Mason, Barker and Ames are investigating, they find more clues like boot marks, a card written V.V...341 and a hammer. Ames also tells that the drawbridge was raised at 6’O Clock last night and she wound it herself. So, the murderer came inside from the moat at 6’O clock and killed Mr. Douglas at 11:00 night when he was watching whether the windows are closed or not.

  • Scene # 9
Setting: Union house saloon. The bar. 1875.
McMurdo meets McGinty as he was advised. He tells his past to the councilor that he killed Jonas Pinto because he was shoving counterfeit money into circulation for him and he was scared that he would split on him. Baldwin enters and fights again because of Ettie. The councilor decides that Ettie is free to choose for herself. Marvin comes to inspect them and warn them and asks him to help in uphold of law and order but he says that he has his own police. All exit.

  • Scene # 10 
Setting: Birlstone Manor 1895. The study.
Holmes investigates the arm of, that had the mark, and it had made pain. Murder wasn’t so unexpected, no stains on hammer, then they take the body. The gun company was Pennsylvania Small Arms Company. The killer was of an American owner. They suspect Mrs. Douglas as she had lived in America, as the committee of the murder. 

  • Scene # 11
Setting: Union house saloon. 1875. The bar.
All the scowrers are discussing about murders. McMurdo is being tested as a scowrer and he was been welcomed in the lodge by the Councilor McGinty. Then all of them discuss about a job that was to be done, to kill Andrew Rae. They also make plan to kill Josiah Dunn and also to kill Journalist James Stanger. Morris offends but gets scolded by McGinty and then is ordered to obey him and he apologizes, then for the job the Willaby brothers, Scanlan, Baldwin, and McMurdo are selected to go and beat James Stanger, and kill Andrew and Josiah Dunn.

  • Scene # 12
Setting: Outside the offices of Vermissa Herald. 1875.
McMurdo, Scanlan, Art and Frank Willaby, and Baldwin come in. Baldwin starts to beat James Stanger until his face got bloodied. McMurdo tells Baldwin to stop beating him or else he would die, but he don’t stops. After some while everyone exits, including James Stanger.

  • Scene # 13
Setting: A Street. 1875.
 Ettie and McMurdo haves a little conversation and then Ettie leaves. Then, Morris Approaches McMurdo and he want to tell something to him, he asked him not to reveal it to anyone. He told his emotional story to McMurdo and tells that he doesn’t wants to be the part of the lodge.

  • Scene # 14
Setting: Birlstone Manor. 1895. The study.
Ames, Barker, Mrs. Allen, and Mrs. Douglas tell about everything that happened before Douglas’s murder. So there was a lot of information gathered with Holmes and Inspector McDonald like; Barker was a good friend of Douglas, McGinty had some kind of fear with the valley of fear and McGinty, and Mrs. Allen heard the door slamming at around half an hour before the murder took place. She could not hear the gunshot because she had some problem in hearing. Ames told that before the murder, Mr. Douglas went to shopping to tunbridge wells. Barker also added that he didn’t know Mrs. Douglas before their marriage. Douglas was jealous of his and Mrs. Douglas’ friendship. 

ACT NO.02:

  • Scene # 1
Setting: Widow Namara’s parlor. 1875.
McGinty and McMurdo are having a serious conversation, McGinty asks McMurdo that what was brother Morris speaking to you about? McMurdo said that he asked him for a clerkship in his store. McGinty said that Morris is a disloyal brother. Then, they make a plan to kill Chester Wilcox, as they finish off their conversation Inspector Marvin comes and arrests them. 

  • Scene # 2
Setting: The courtroom. 1895.
The magistrate denied the proof of the moustaches as it was of low-level. He was convinced that the accused are innocent and he discharged them and also apologized if this caused them any inconvenience. Mrs. Larbey gets agitated that the scowrers were let off. Magistrate asks one of his officers to escort him from the curt. 

  • Scene # 3
Setting: Birlstone Manor. 1895. The Garden.
Dr. Watson witnesses Mrs. Douglas and Cecil Barker sitting under a tree on a bench, laughing and giggling like nothing worse has happened to them. 

  • Scene # 4
Setting: Birlstone Manor. 1895.
The Study.Holmes and Watson are discussing about some clues. They also find/ discover some new clues, like: Barker’s slipper stained with blood; he also stated that barker marked the window himself and all he stated was a lie. The ring was taken after the murder was committed. Holmes and Watson discuss the possibility of Mrs. Douglas and barker being the murderer. The bicycle belongs to an American + Holmes said that the murder was committed half an hour before they were informed. Mrs. Douglas and Barker arrived at Birlstone house before the murderer escaped and helped him to go out. 

  • Scene # 5
Setting: Widow Namara’s. The parlor. 1875.
McMurdo is writing a secret letter, Ettie comes and asks whom is he writing that letter to. But he doesn’t replies, and then Ettie asks him to leave the valley of fear. She also told that Chester Wilcox’s house was burnt into ash but he fled away before he would also be burnt. Andrew and Lawler were given a job to be done, that visit Widow Namara’s parlor. 

Scene # 6
Setting: Crow Hill mine. 1875.
Lawler and Andrew approaches Josiah Dunn and kills him. Soon Menzies also gets killed. McMurdo and Scanlan clearly witness the whole scene. 

  • Scene # 7
Setting: The Westville arms. 1895. The dining room.
All are having breakfast, McDonald and Watson joins. Holmes says that this case is wastage of time. And he also says to abandon it. McDonald asks that what he found last night in birlstone house. He tells that he found the history of birlstone manor. He tells that there is a secret cellar for concealment. King Charles 2 concealed there. Then he asks Watson to write a letter to barker asking him to drain the moat. Watson thinks that it’s impossible but it’s Holmes’ plan…!!

  • Scene # 8
Setting: Union house saloon. 1875. The bar. 
Morris tells McMurdo about a Pinkerton’s man working in Vermissa Valley, Birdy Edwards. He tells that he doesn’t want him to be killed by the scowrers, but McMurdo says they will but asks him not to worry. Morris also shows him the telegram he got from his friend who is working in the telegram office, who deciphered this message. McMurdo tells this to McGinty and they make a plan to teach him a hard lesson.

  • Scene # 9
Birlstone Manor. 1895. The study.
Holmes showed Barker, Mason, Watson and Mrs. Douglas the boots, American styled clothes, knife, pants and an overcoat he found from the moat. They get an idea who the murderer could be. 

  • Scene # 10 
Setting: Widow Namara’s. 1875. The bar.
McMurdo, McGinty and other scowrers are ready to attack on Birdy Edwards, but, then, McMurdo reveals that he is Birdy Edwards. He asks captain Marvin comes and McMurdo asks him to keep them in jail. Everyone exits but Baldwin and McGinty warns him that the game isn’t over yet. 

  • Scene # 11
Setting: birlstone manor. 1895. The study.
Mr. Douglas is alive; Holmes knew about it, he told that Baldwin was murdered by Mr. Douglas. Douglas tells that he was writing notes and a recount about the last 20 years. He tells that, he knew that Ted Baldwin would kill him, so he killed him instead for his self-defense. And as, he had killed a bad man, he wasn’t arrested; instead, he was advised to leave the valley of fear.

  • Epilogue
Setting: 221b Baker Street. 1895. Sitting room.
Holmes and Watson are discussing about the notes Mr. John Douglas had made. Watson states that the mystery is over. But Holmes says that the mystery is not over yet, referring to a note of john Douglas saying, “Dear me! Mr. Holmes, Dear me!” Barker come and tells that Douglas lost his life. Holmes states it’s a murder not a co-incidence. The murderer is not from America but from London. There’s big hand behind his murder. They suspect professor Moriarty. Watson asks if Moriarty is never to be taken down. Sherlock Holmes asks for some time.

The valley of fear- complete synopsis


Complete synopsis of The valley of fear

The Valley of Fear is a mystery novel by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle and was the last of the four Sherlock Holmes novels written by the author. It was first published in serial form in the Strand Magazine from September 1914 to May 1915.
At the outset of the novel Sherlock Holmes receives a message from Porlock, an agent to Professor Moriarty. Porlock occasionally sends Holmes insider information.
Moriarty is blameless in the eyes of the law but Holmes knows him to be "the controlling brain of the underworld." Together Holmes and Watson decipher Porlock's message as indicating that a man named Douglas residing at Birlstone is in danger.
Inspector MacDonald of Scotland Yard calls upon Holmes to ask for his help and informs him that Mr Douglas of Birlstone Manor House has been murdered that morning. Holmes tells MacDonald that since he received an alert from Porlock it is probable that Professor Moriarty's influence exists in the matter.
MacDonald reminds Holmes that the professor is an educated and well respected man. Holmes informs MacDonald that although the Professor's salary is seven hundred pounds a year he owns a painting worth over forty thousand pounds and the Inspector agrees that this is suspicious.
Holmes, Watson and MacDonald travel to Birlstone village in Sussex. John Douglas was murdered at around midnight and had been shot in the head. The house is an old manor with a moat and drawbridge. A man name Cecil Barker was staying at the house on the night the murder took place and was a regular guest of Mr and Mrs Douglas.
A sawn off shotgun was found at the scene. It appeared to have been fired at close range which caused the head to have been completely blown to pieces.
Cecil Barker claims that he was upstairs in his room when he heard the shot and rushed downstairs. The drawbridge was up at this time and Cecil claims that he lowered it in order to admit help. There is a mark of blood upon the window sill where someone seems to have entered. Cecil says that he thinks the intruder got away by wading through the moat but has no explanation for how the assailant entered the house in the first place unless he entered before that time and waited in the house.
A card lays beside the body with the initials V.V scrawled in ink upon it. A small branded mark is seen on the man's arm but it has not been made recently. Douglas' wedding ring appears to have been taken from his hand which seems indicative since no others rings were taken.
The police speculatethat the murderer must have escaped across the moat but if this was so then the question of how he has so far eluded the police when all his clothes were wet as he walked through the town is a mystery.
Holmes notices that Mr Douglas seems to have had only one dumbbell to hand in the study which strikes him as odd.
From interviews with the people in the house more details about the events are established. Cecil Barker heard the shot, rushed down from his bedroom and entered the study and upon seeing Douglas murdered he rang violently on the bell. The servants and Mrs Douglas all rushed to the scene. Mr Barker persuaded Mrs Douglas to return to her room which she did. Holmes mentions to Watson that he thinks it was strange for Mrs Douglas to have shown so little outward emotion and not to have rushed to her husband's body.
Cecil Barker says that he believes a secret society of men pursued Douglas and that this fear for his life is what prompted him to live in such a quiet area of England.
Mr Douglas married his wife when he came to England five years previously. He had been married before and this first wife died of Typhoid. Douglas had met and worked with Cecil Barker in America for a time and then and suddenly left for Europe.
Both Cecil Barker and Mrs Douglas were aware that some danger overhung Douglas and that this danger was connected with some episode of his life in America. Mrs Douglas says that she had heard her husband mention "The Valley of Fear".
By studying the soles of Cecil Barker's slippers Holmes ascertains that Barker used the sole of his own shoe to make the mark on the window sill so as to give the appearance that someone exited that way.
Back at their lodgings in the village Holmes tells Watson that Cecil Barker and Mrs Douglas are certainly lying but that why they are lying is not yet clear.
When a shotgun is fired at close range the sound is muffled. The housekeeper heard what she described as a door slamming half an hour before the alarm was raised. Holmes believes that what the housekeeper actually heard was the shot fired when the murder really took place.
White Mason, the Sussex detective, and MacDonald report that they have traced a bicycle found on the grounds of the house to an American staying at a guest house. It seems likely that he was the assailant since the gun used in the murder was of an American make but there is no sign of the man.
Holmes tells MacDonald to write to Cecil Barker and inform him that the police ntend to search the moat the next day. That night Holmes, Watson, MacDonald and White lay in wait outside Birlstone Manor and see Cecil Barker fish something out of the moat. Cecil refuses to explain the situation but at that moment Mr Douglas appears, alive and well.
Douglas hands Dr Watson a written account called The Valley of Fear which he says explains the early part of his story and why he ended up being hunted in such a desperate way.
Douglas explains the recent events. He had spotted an enemy of his, Ted Baldwin, in the area and expected an attack. The next day he was attacked is his study, the assailant attempted to shoot him but Douglas grabbed the gun first and in the struggle between the two men Baldwin received a shot to his face. With Cecil's help Douglas dressed the man in his own clothes and disposed of Baldwin's suit in the moat. He put his rings on the man's fingers except his wedding ring which he could not get off.
The card was the mark that Baldwin had brought with him and intended to leave on Douglas' body, V.V stood for Vermissa Valley. Douglas explains that the branding mark was that of a society to which both he and Baldwin belonged. Since they both bore the mark on their arms this would make it likely that the bodies could not be told apart since Baldwin's head was destroyed utterly by the shot.
Since the time of the murder Cecil and Mrs Douglas had covered for Douglas who was hiding in the house.
The report Douglas gives to Watson explains how he came to be hunted so viciously. Douglas' real name is Birdy Edwards and he was at one time a detective with the Chicago detective agency Pinkerton's.
Edwards had infiltrated a dangerous gang in Vermissa Valley, which had become known as the Valley of Fear, and brought them to justice.
Edwards' life had never been safe since some of the criminals who had escaped the death penalty were released from jail. Edwards had moved around from place to place. His first wife Ettie, whom he had met in the valley, passed away. He then met Cecil and the two made a fortune in business together. Hounded once again Douglas disappeared and made for England where he met and married his second wife.
Holmes urges Douglas to leave England and warns that a new threat, greater than all those of his past, now hangs over him. Douglas takes this advice but is mysteriously lost overboard on the vessel bearing him and his wife to Africa.
Holmes is convinced that Professor Moriarty was consulted by the men who hunted Douglas and that it was this criminal mastermind whose direction ended Douglas' life. Holmes intends to bring Moriarty down but warns Watson and MacDonald that it will take some time to achieve.

The four men rush in and surprise Cecil, the bundle he has fished from the moat turns out to be the clothes of the missing American connected with the bicycle. It was weighted down with the missing dumbbell.



Thursday 25 October 2012

THE VALLEY OF FEAR (Summary)
Act 1 Scene 6
Setting: A railway Compartment 1895.

Holmes, Watson and McDonald are sitting down and are discussing the clues. Holmes and McDonald are talking about the moat, while Watson is trying to find out how the murderer escaped. Holmes tells about Porlock's message, and they start suspecting professor Moriarty. McDonald also suspects Barker as Mason tells them that Mr.Douglas disliked Mrs.Douglas' and Barker's friendship. Holmes has a feeling that their is a chain between Mrs.Douglas and Professor Moriarty and he wants to follow that chain.
 

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Summary scenes 1 till 5. Best of luck!

                                 THE VALLEY OF FEAR
Act I
Scene 1

 
Setting: railway compartment, vermissa valley 1875
McMurdo has arrived to vermissa valley. He is travelling in a train compartment. He seats down, takes out a paper have a look at it, takes out a revolver check if it is loaded and puts it back. Scanlan and Cormac see this. They ask him if he is armed and his whereabouts. Mcm

urdo explains that he is from Chicago and one of the ancient orders of freemen. Scanlan says the sign, “dark nights are unpleasant”, and Mcmurdo shakes his hand and completes the countersign “for strangers to travel”. They introduce themselves to each other. Scanlan and Cormac ask him to visit McGinty who is the body master and everything happens in vermissa valley based upon his order. Scanlan and Cormac get off at their destined stop. Police officers approach McMurdo; he doesn’t talk to them positively. Police officers warn him to be careful while choosing friends in vermissa valley.

Scene 2

Setting: Shafter’s lodging 1875.
Baldwin who is a scowrer trying to convince Ettie to go out. Ettie is giving excuses but promises to meet on Friday as she is threatened because Baldwin is a scowrer. Shafter arrives and witnesses Baldwin. Shafter does like Baldwin presence around his daughter and in his lodge. McMurdo arrives and he is supposed to stay at Shafter’s. He finds Ettie adorable.

Scene 3

Setting: Baker Street 1895.
Holmes is an investigator. He is reading a ciphered message stating 534..C2…13. He is suspecting Professor Moriarty and stating that he is controlling power of underworld. He is the schemer of all the time and a mind behind devilry. Watson calls him as Napoleon of Crime. He is such a clever mind that he never leaves any proof against him. He is the controlling man of a chain of people including fighting men, pickpockets, blackmailers and criminals. They tend to decode the ciphered message. Fred Porlock is Professor Moriarty and Watson is dreading as he suspects him and asks Holmes to burn the message.
They tend to guess the book. Their first guess is “Bible” but the idea gets rejected as bible’s each edition has different pages. Second guess is Bradshaw which is a railway timetable. This idea also gets rejected as the vocabulary is limited so a general message cannot be sent via it. Finally Almanac is chosen. They are able to decipher the message “there is danger may come to Douglas at birlstone house birlstone pressing”. at the same time , MacDonald approaches and tells them that Mr. Douglas has been murdered.

Scene 4 

Setting: union house salon 1875 the bar.
McGinty and his fellow scowrers are reading news written by James Stranger. This news unfolds the truth about the existence of criminal organization. McGinty wants to teach a hard lesson to James for unveiling the truth of scowrers existence. Meanwhile Scanlan approaches and informs McGinty about his meeting with McMurdo.

Scene 5

Setting: Birlstone Manor 1895 the study.
A body is lying on the floor with its head behind the chair. A sawn off gun lying as well. On the table, hand lamp is placed with a partially burnt candle. A single dumb bell is lying beneath the table. Hammer is lying; window and curtain are partially opened. Doctor Wood and Sergeant Wilson are inspecting the body and collecting the findings. They are waiting for McMurdo and Holmes to arrive. Barker is Mr Douglas close friend and he informs the police first. When Mason comes in he sees that gun is wired. They also get to see tattoo on his arm with a triangle inside a circle. Barker arrives and offices interrogate him. Barker explains that the murder has been committed around half past eleven last night. According to him, He was in the bedroom when he heard the gun shot. He reaches within 30 seconds and finds Mr. Douglas lying. Mrs. Douglas also comes down but he prevent her from seeing the sight

SUMMARY OF SCENE 12

In this scene they are telling you that Baldwin,Willaby brothers,Scanlan and Mcmurdo came on quietly.Baldwin was holding stick whereas Scanlan and Willaby brothers were holding a lamp.As McMurdo was new in the scowrers gang so Scanlan was asking some questions from him that did he like this place or not.McMurdo directly said that it is a good place for him.Stanger enters into
the room with his bloodied face.Baldwin enters along with him and beat Stanger very badly with a stick.After a moment McMurdo pulls Baldwin back and said to him that it was bodymasters order not to kill Stanger.Willaby brothers agreed with McMurdo.Now they got separated and scowrers go off separately whereas Stanger exists.